diff --git a/data/pokemon/dex_text.asm b/data/pokemon/dex_text.asm index d894a8d5..e2907820 100644 --- a/data/pokemon/dex_text.asm +++ b/data/pokemon/dex_text.asm @@ -1,31 +1,31 @@ _RhydonDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Its horn can" - next "destroy boulders." - next "Evolving to stand" + text "After standing on" + next "its hind legs, its" + next "brain developed." - page "on its hind legs" - next "stimulated its" - next "brain" + page "It can punch holes" + next "through boulders" + next "with its horn" dex _KangaskhanDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Females raise" - next "babies in their" - next "pouches." + text "The female raises" + next "its offspring in" + next "its belly pouch." - page "They are adept" - next "at using COMET" - next "PUNCH" + page "It is adept at" + next "attacking using" + next "COMET PUNCH" dex _NidoranMDexEntry:: - text "Stiffens its ears" - next "to sense danger." - next "The larger its" + text "When listening to" + next "distant sounds, it" + next "flaps its ears" - page "horns, the more" - next "powerful its" - next "secreted venom" + page "like wings. Its" + next "horn secretes a" + next "powerful venom" dex _ClefairyDexEntry:: ; new entry, altered from the original. @@ -39,29 +39,29 @@ _ClefairyDexEntry:: ; new entry, altered from the original. dex _SpearowDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "SPEAROW is far" - next "more aggressive" + text "More aggressive" next "than PIDGEY. It" + next "busily flits about" - page "busily searches" - next "for prey in tall" - next "grass" + page "in tall grass," + next "searching for" + next "insects to eat" dex _VoltorbDexEntry:: - text "Recently, VOLTORB" - next "have been found" + text "Sometimes migrates" + next "to urban areas by" next "traveling on" - page "power lines. They" - next "tend to explode" + page "power lines. It" + next "tends to explode" next "without warning" dex _NidokingDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Its venomous horn" - next "gives it an edge" - next "in battle." + text "Recognised by its" + next "rock-hard hide and" + next "venomous horn." page "It will shy away" next "from fighting" @@ -69,13 +69,13 @@ _NidokingDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _SlowbroDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "If SLOWPOKE goes" - next "goes out to sea," - next "it may get bit" + text "A SLOWPOKE that" + next "hunts in the sea" + next "will occasionally" - page "by a TAABAN and" - next "evolve into" - next "a SLOWBRO" + page "be bitten by a" + next "TAABAN, causing" + next "it to evolve" dex _IvysaurDexEntry:: @@ -99,13 +99,13 @@ _ExeggutorDexEntry:: dex _LickitungDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "To appease its" - next "voracious" - next "appetite, its" + text "It has a lazy" + next "nature and a" + next "ravenous appetite," - page "tongue evolved" - next "to move like a" - next "human arm" + page "moving its tongue" + next "like a human arm" + next "for grabbing food" dex _ExeggcuteDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -129,83 +129,83 @@ _GrimerDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _GengarDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "There are shrines" - next "honoring GENGAR" - next "on mountains. It" + text "Shrines have been" + next "built to honor it." + next "Said to emerge" - page "is said to appear" - next "from the dark to" - next "kill lost souls" + page "from the dark to" + next "kill people lost" + next "on mountains" dex _NidoranFDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "NIDORAN breed in" - next "spring. At the end" - next "of summer, they" + text "Breeds in spring" + next "every year, laying" + next "two eggs at the" - page "lay two eggs. Baby" - next "NIDORAN are just" + page "end of summer. The" + next "babies are only" next "4 inches long" dex -_NidoqueenDexEntry:: ; does not need a n.ew entry - text "Its hard scales" - next "provide strong" - next "protection. It" +_NidoqueenDexEntry:: ; new entry + text "Covered in needle-" + next "like scales that" + next "stand up when it" - page "uses its hefty" - next "bulk to execute" - next "powerful moves" + page "becomes agitated," + next "which it uses to" + next "protect its young" dex _CuboneDexEntry:: ; new entry text "It dons the skull" - next "of its dead" - next "mother. While" + next "of its deceased" + next "mother. When it" - page "untrusting, it" - next "wails when left" - next "all alone" + page "cries, the skull" + next "rattles, making a" + next "clattering sound" dex _RhyhornDexEntry:: ; new entry text "While dim, its" - next "ramming can" - next "destroy buildings." + next "ramming is strong" + next "enough to destroy" - page "Due to this, they" - next "are unsuitable" - next "house pets" + page "buildings. Due to" + next "this, it isn't a" + next "very suitable pet" dex _LaprasDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "It is a placid" - next "#MON. Little" - next "progress has" + text "Placid in nature," + next "Little progress" + next "has been made in" - page "been made in" - next "studying it due" - next "to poachers" + page "studying it due" + next "to overhunting" + next "by poachers" dex _ArcanineDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "A legendary" - next "#MON that" - next "appears in" + text "Often depicted in" + next "Chinese folklore." + next "This legendary" - page "Chinese folklore." - next "It can outrun" + page "#MON is capable" + next "of outrunning" next "a racing car" dex -_MewDexEntry:: ; does not have an entry in the book - text "So rare that it" - next "is still said to" - next "be a mirage by" +_MewDexEntry:: ; does not have an entry in the book, so based it off FireRed's + text "A rare #MON of" + next "South America that" + next "was presumed to be" - page "many experts. Only" - next "a few people have" - next "seen it worldwide" + page "extinct. It can" + next "learn almost any" + next "technique" dex _GyaradosDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -219,13 +219,13 @@ _GyaradosDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _ShellderDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Its shell is" - next "harder than" - next "diamonds. It" + text "Encased in a shell" + next "that is harder" + next "than diamond. The" - page "uses it to" - next "squeeze foes" - next "with CLAMP" + page "body inside the" + next "shell, however," + next "is very tender" dex _TentacoolDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -249,13 +249,13 @@ _GastlyDexEntry:: ; Dex entry from Green, swapping the Indian Elephant for Tram dex _ScytherDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Few specimens" - next "have ever been" - next "caught. While" + text "Few specimens have" + next "ever been caught." + next "While capable of" - page "it can fly using" - next "its wings, it" - next "rarely does this" + page "flight using its" + next "wings, it rarely" + next "seems to do this" dex _StaryuDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -279,9 +279,9 @@ _BlastoiseDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _PinsirDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Once it grips" - next "its prey, it will" - next "not stop until it" + text "Once it grips its" + next "prey, it will not" + next "let go until it" page "is torn apart. It" next "appears to like" @@ -301,30 +301,30 @@ _TangelaDexEntry:: ; new entry _GrowlitheDexEntry:: ; new entry text "Friendly toward" next "people with a" - next "loyal nature." + next "loyal nature. Its" - page "CINNABAR VOLCANO" - next "influenced its" - next "evolution" + page "development may be" + next "due to CINNABAR's" + next "ecosystem" dex _OnixDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "They usually live" - next "underground," - next "burrowing at over" + text "It usually lives" + next "underground. It" + next "searches for prey" - page "50 miles per" ; changed to imperial to match other measurements - next "hour in search" - next "of prey" + page "while boring its" + next "way through the" + next "earth at 50mph" dex _FearowDexEntry:: ; new entry text "It soars in the" next "sky all day long." - next "Its powerful beak" + next "Its long, powerful" - page "lets it swallow" - next "prey like" + page "beak allows it to" + next "swallow prey like" next "RATTATA whole" dex @@ -334,18 +334,18 @@ _PidgeyDexEntry:: ; new entry next "to hide in tall" page "grass, feeding on" - next "CATERPIE and" - next "WEEDLE" + next "bugs like CATERPIE" + next "and KOKANA" dex _SlowpokeDexEntry:: - text "It always has" - next "a vacant look." - next "While some become" + text "While some people" + next "become relaxed" + next "around SLOWPOKE," - page "relaxed around" - next "SLOWPOKE, others" - next "become irate" + page "others may become" + next "irritated by its" + next "dim, vacant look" dex _KadabraDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -359,39 +359,39 @@ _KadabraDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _GravelerDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "GRAVELER always" - next "smiles, but its" - next "eyes do not." + text "Often seen quickly" + next "rolling down" + next "mountain trails." - page "Its face unnerves" - next "new HIKERs as it" - next "rolls down slopes" + page "Its strange smile" + next "can be unnerving" + next "to novice HIKERs" dex _ChanseyDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "They lay several" + text "It lays several" next "delicious eggs" next "a day. A nursing" - page "#MON, they're" - next "peaceful and do" + page "#MON, it's very" + next "peaceful and does" next "not like fights" dex _MachokeDexEntry:: ; new entry text "Its powerful body" - next "never tires, so" - next "it is often" + next "never gets tired," + next "so it is often" page "employed to help" - next "transport heavy" - next "cargo" + next "people transport" + next "heavy cargo" dex _MrMimeDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "The walls it" - next "mimes are said" - next "to turn real." + text "It is said to" + next "create invisible" + next "walls by miming." page "Its fingertips" next "have suction pads" @@ -459,43 +459,43 @@ _DrowzeeDexEntry:: dex _GolemDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Its shell is made" - next "of rocky slabs." - next "To grow larger," + text "Its rugged shell" + next "is made from rock-" + next "like slabs. It" - page "GOLEM will shed" - next "it during the" - next "summer" + page "sheds this shell" + next "annually to" + next "grow larger" dex _MagmarDexEntry:: ; new entry, modified from the original - text "Found only in hot" - next "areas, MAGMAR's" - next "body burns at" + text "A rare species," + next "sometimes sighted" + next "in volcanic areas." - page "2,200 degrees F." ; changed to imperial - next "Hides perfectly" - next "among flames" + page "The temperature of" + next "its body can reach" + next "2,200 degrees F" dex _ElectabuzzDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "They feed on" - next "powerful" - next "electricity. It" + text "Occasionally seen" + next "in power plants," + next "feeding on strong" - page "can distinguish" - next "colors, but red" - next "makes it angry" + page "electricity. The" + next "color red appears" + next "to anger it" dex _MagnetonDexEntry:: ; new entry text "What keeps it" next "levitating is" - next "unknown. It" + next "currently unknown." - page "discharges" - next "intense magnetic" - next "rays" + page "It discharges" + next "intense voltage" + next "and magnetic rays" dex _KoffingDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -519,23 +519,23 @@ _MankeyDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _SeelDexEntry:: - text "Its thick hide" - next "lets it stay" - next "active even in" + text "Lives in cold sea" + next "caves. Its thick" + next "hide allows it to" - page "temperatures of" - next "-40 degrees. They" - next "live in sea caves" + page "stay active in" + next "temperatures of" + next "-40 degrees F" dex _DiglettDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Lives about one" - next "yard underground," - next "but their trails" + text "Burrows through" + next "the ground seeking" + next "ONIX's leftovers." - page "reveal them. They" - next "seek ONIX's" - next "leftovers" + page "The trails of soil" + next "it leaves behind" + next "reveal its path" dex _TaurosDexEntry:: ; new entry - modified first line from the original @@ -580,13 +580,13 @@ _DragoniteDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _DoduoDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "First discovered" - next "3 years ago. It" - next "hates flying due" + text "A sudden mutation" + next "first discovered" + next "3 years ago. Its" - page "to short wings," - next "and can't move if" - next "a head disagrees" + page "tiny wings make" + next "flying difficult," + next "so prefers to run" dex _PoliwagDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -600,24 +600,24 @@ _PoliwagDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _JynxDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "While it speaks" - next "in a human-" - next "like manner," + text "While it speaks in" + next "a language that" + next "sounds human, it" - page "the language" - next "seems impossible" - next "to translate" + page "is currently" + next "impossible to" + next "fully translate" dex _MoltresDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "The legendary" - next "phoenix is said" - next "to be modeled" + text "With its dazzling," + next "fiery wings, it is" + next "said that MOLTRES" - page "after MOLTRES." - next "Its fiery wings" - next "dazzle onlookers" + page "is the inspiration" + next "behind the legend" + next "of the phoenix" dex _ArticunoDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -631,16 +631,16 @@ _ArticunoDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _ZapdosDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "As the divine" - next "bird presiding" - next "over the heavens," + text "Said to be the" + next "divine bird that" + next "presides over the" - page "ZAPDOS spends" - next "thousands of years" + page "heavens, ZAPDOS" + next "spends milennia" next "above the clouds" dex -_DittoDexEntry:: ; does not need a n.ew entry +_DittoDexEntry:: ; does not need a new entry text "Capable of copying" next "an enemy's genetic" next "code to instantly" @@ -650,34 +650,34 @@ _DittoDexEntry:: ; does not need a n.ew entry next "of the enemy" dex -_MeowthDexEntry:: ; could have a new entry but this is already very similar... - text "Adores circular" - next "objects. Wanders" - next "the streets on a" +_MeowthDexEntry:: ; new entry + text "Sleeps through the" + next "day before waking" + next "at night. With" - page "nightly basis to" - next "look for dropped" - next "loose change" + page "eyes aglow, it" + next "searches around" + next "for loose change" dex _KrabbyDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "It raises its" - next "claws to" - next "intimidate its" + text "Raises its pincers" + next "in the air to" + next "intimidate foes." - page "foes. However," - next "KRABBY dislikes" - next "fighting" + page "However, they" + next "usually prefer to" + next "avoid fighting" dex -_VulpixDexEntry:: ; Changed to make it not too similar to Mikon's dex entry. ~M - text "As each tail" ; second page altered ~ PvK 7-12-2022 - next "grows, its fur" - next "becomes softer." +_VulpixDexEntry:: ; Changed to make it not too similar to Mikon's dex entry. ~M + text "Upon evolving, its" ; second page altered ~ PvK 7-12-2022 + next "three tails split" + next "into six. This" - page "It is thought" - next "to be related" - next "to foxes" + page "#MON is often" + next "thought to be" + next "related to foxes" dex _NinetalesDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -700,14 +700,14 @@ _PikachuDexEntry:: ; new entry next "THUNDERSHOCK" dex -_RaichuDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Its mastery of" - next "electricity lets" - next "it loose up to" +_RaichuDexEntry:: ; new entry, reworded since Trampel is a Ground type so cannot be KO'd by an electric move... + text "Even a TRAMPEL's" + next "thick skin would" + next "struggle to handle" - page "100,000 volts. It" - next "can KO a TRAMPEL" - next "in one strike" + page "RAICHU's shocks," + next "which can reach" + next "100,000 volts" dex _DratiniDexEntry:: ; new entry, doctored the entry with the originally intended lore. @@ -715,8 +715,8 @@ _DratiniDexEntry:: ; new entry, doctored the entry with the originally intended next "mythical #MON" next "until recently," - page "when someone" - next "fished one up in" + page "when a fisherman" + next "hooked one inside" next "the SAFARI ZONE" dex @@ -731,23 +731,23 @@ _DragonairDexEntry:: ; new entry, altered original dex _KabutoDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "The ancestor of" - next "hermit crabs" - next "and turtles." + text "Said to be the" + next "ancestor of hermit" + next "crabs and turtles," - page "They are thought" - next "to have disliked" - next "fighting" + page "it had a tough" + next "shell, but was a" + next "slow swimmer" dex _KabutopsDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "The oldest of" - next "all #MON. The" - next "only complete" + text "When it evolved," + next "its nature turned" + next "aggressive. The" - page "KABUTOPS fossil" - next "was discovered" - next "6 years ago" + page "only complete" + next "fossil was found" + next "only 6 years ago" dex _HorseaDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -770,44 +770,44 @@ _SeadraDexEntry:: next "fainting" dex -_SandshrewDexEntry:: ; does not need n.ew entry. - text "Burrows deep" - next "underground in" - next "arid locations" +_SandshrewDexEntry:: ; new entry. + text "It lives inside" + next "deep underground" + next "burrows. Curls" - page "far from water." - next "It only emerges" - next "to hunt for food" + page "itself up into a" + next "ball to protect" + next "against attacks" dex _SandslashDexEntry:: - text "Curls up into a" - next "spiny ball when" - next "threatened. It" + text "Adept at attacking" + next "with the spines" + next "on its back and" - page "can roll while" - next "curled up to" - next "attack or escape" + page "its sharp claws" + next "while quickly" + next "scurrying about" dex _OmanyteDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "It was related" - next "to mollusks and" - next "fed on small fish" + text "It swam by waving" + next "its ten tentacles" + next "about. It fed on" - page "and plankton. It" - next "swam by waving" - next "its 10 feet" + page "small fish and" + next "plankton, and was" + next "related to squids" dex _OmastarDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "A prehistoric" - next "#MON. It hunted" - next "by clinging to" + text "This prehistoric" + next "#MON hunted by" + next "ensnaring prey" - page "prey before" - next "feasting with" - next "its beak" + page "with its dexterous" + next "tentacles, then" + next "biting them" dex _JigglypuffDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -830,7 +830,7 @@ _WigglytuffDexEntry:: ; new entry next "foreign buyers" dex -_EeveeDexEntry:: ; does not need a n.ew entry +_EeveeDexEntry:: ; does not need a new entry text "Its genetic code" next "is irregular." next "It may mutate if" @@ -841,41 +841,41 @@ _EeveeDexEntry:: ; does not need a n.ew entry dex _FlareonDexEntry:: ; new entry, sort of modified off the original - text "It stores fire" - next "in a flame sac." - next "It blows out" + text "It has a flame" + next "sac in its body." + next "After inhaling," - page "flames at nearly" - next "3,100 degrees" - next "Fahrenheit" ; changed to imperial + page "it blows out" + next "flames that reach" + next "3,100 degrees F" ; changed to imperial dex _JolteonDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "When startled," - next "its body hair" - next "stands upright." + text "When angered or" + next "startled, its fur" + next "stands upright," - page "It may use PIN" - next "MISSILE to" - next "puncture foes" + page "then uses its" + next "needle-like body" + next "to puncture foes" dex _VaporeonDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Its cellular" - next "structure is" - next "close to water." + text "It has a cellular" + next "structure similar" + next "to water, giving" - page "It easily swims" - next "in water, but can" - next "also melt into it" + page "it the ability to" + next "melt invisibly" + next "as it swims" dex _MachopDexEntry:: ; new entry, modified from the original. - text "Its body is" - next "entirely" - next "musclebound." + text "Its whole body is" + next "musclebound. Even" + next "though it's the" - page "Despite its size," + page "size of a child," next "it can throw up" next "to 100 adults" dex @@ -901,22 +901,22 @@ _EkansDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _ParasDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Their mushrooms" - next "are called" - next "tochukaso." + text "The mushrooms on" + next "the bug's back are" + next "called tochukaso." - page "They will grow" - next "alongside the" - next "#MON" + page "These mushrooms" + next "grow alongside" + next "the host" dex _PoliwhirlDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "While its legs" - next "are well-" - next "developed," + text "Its two legs are" + next "well-developed." + next "Though capable of" - page "POLIWHIRL much" - next "prefers life" + page "living on land, it" + next "much prefers life" next "in the water" dex @@ -940,7 +940,7 @@ _WeedleDexEntry:: ; new entry, modified from the original, including adding the next "intimidate foes" dex -_KakunaDexEntry:: ; does not need a n.ew entry. +_KakunaDexEntry:: ; does not need a new entry. text "Almost incapable" next "of moving, this" next "#MON can only" @@ -962,12 +962,12 @@ _BeedrillDexEntry:: ; new entry _DodrioDexEntry:: ; new entry text "Historians claim" - next "that a religion" - next "in Central" + next "that an ancient" + next "religion in" - page "America revered" - next "DODRIO as their" - next "symbol" + page "Central America" + next "revered DODRIO as" + next "their symbol" dex _PrimeapeDexEntry:: ; this entry is just like the pokedex, so no new one @@ -982,22 +982,22 @@ _PrimeapeDexEntry:: ; this entry is just like the pokedex, so no new one _DugtrioDexEntry:: ; new entry, modified from the original text "A team of DIGLETT" - next "triplets. They" - next "burrow deep" + next "triplets. It digs" + next "deep underground" - page "underground to" - next "hide themselves" + page "to hide itself" next "before striking" + next "its opponent" dex -_VenomothDexEntry:: ; does not need a n.ew entry - text "The dust-like" - next "scales covering" - next "its wings are" +_VenomothDexEntry:: ; new entry + text "It scatters highly" + next "toxic dust around" + next "as it flies, due" - page "color coded to" - next "indicate the kinds" - next "of poison it has" + page "to the powdery" + next "scales that cover" + next "its wings" dex _DewgongDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -1020,14 +1020,14 @@ _CaterpieDexEntry:: ; new page next "underground" dex -_MetapodDexEntry:: ; does not need a n.ew entry - text "This #MON is" - next "vulnerable to" - next "attack while its" +_MetapodDexEntry:: ; new entry + text "Although encased" + next "in a sturdy shell," + next "the body inside is" - page "shell is soft," - next "exposing its weak" - next "and tender body" + page "weak and soft. It" + next "cannot withstand" + next "a harsh attack" dex _ButterfreeDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -1035,52 +1035,52 @@ _ButterfreeDexEntry:: ; new entry next "covered in water-" next "repellent scales" - page "that let it fly" - next "even on rainy" - next "days" + page "that allow it to" + next "fly, even on" + next "rainy days" dex _MachampDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Can throw 1,000" - next "punches in 2" - next "seconds. While" + text "It can launch a" + next "flurry of 1,000" + next "punches in just" - page "thought to evolve" - next "from MACHOKE, the" - next "method is unclear" + page "two seconds. What" + next "triggers it to" + next "evolve is unclear" dex _GolduckDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "When swimming," - next "GOLDUCK is" - next "faster than a" + text "Its webbed hands" + next "and feet make it" + next "a superb swimmer." - page "motorboat. It is" - next "often mistaken" - next "for Kappa" + page "At top speed, it" + next "can even overtake" + next "a motorboat" dex _HypnoDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "In towns where" - next "HYPNO appear," - next "disappearances" + text "It carries a" + next "pendulum-like" + next "device. Wherever" - page "of children" - next "mysteriously" - next "surge" + page "HYPNO travel," + next "cases of missing" + next "children surge" dex _GolbatDexEntry:: ; new entry text "Using its sharp" - next "fangs, GOLBAT can" - next "suck up to" + next "fangs, it latches" + next "onto its prey," - page "10 ounces of" - next "blood in a" - next "single bite" + page "then drains over" + next "10 ounces of blood" + next "in one bite" dex -_MewtwoDexEntry:: ; does not need a n.ew entry +_MewtwoDexEntry:: ; does not need a new entry text "It was created by" next "a scientist after" next "years of horrific" @@ -1101,26 +1101,26 @@ _SnorlaxDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _MagikarpDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "A pitifully weak" - next "#MON, recent" - next "studies have" + text "Virtually hopeless" + next "in both power" + next "and speed. Recent" - page "revealed dragon" - next "cells in its" - next "body" + page "studies have found" + next "dragon cells in" + next "its body, however" dex _MukDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Usually mingles" - next "with soil." - next "Analysis of its" + text "Hides itself by" + next "blending in with" + next "soil. Analysis of" - page "cells revealed" + page "its cells revealed" next "many unnatural" next "substances" dex -_KinglerDexEntry:: ; does not need a n.ew entry +_KinglerDexEntry:: ; does not need a new entry text "The large pincer" next "has 10,000 hp of" next "crushing power." @@ -1141,11 +1141,11 @@ _CloysterDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _ElectrodeDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Because they" - next "explode with" - next "little to no" + text "A feared #MON" + next "that explodes in" + next "response to even" - page "provocation, it" + page "minor stimuli. It" next "has been called" next "the Bomb Ball" dex @@ -1156,8 +1156,8 @@ _ClefableDexEntry:: ; new entry next "developed. It" page "can hear a pin" - next "drop from a" - next "kilometer away" + next "drop from nearly" + next "a mile away" dex _WeezingDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -1171,33 +1171,33 @@ _WeezingDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _PersianDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Before pouncing," - next "it raises its" - next "tail straight." + text "Has a ferocious" + next "temperament, but" + next "it's loved for its" - page "Women often keep" - next "them as trophy" - next "pets" + page "gorgeous coat." + next "It's often kept" + next "as a trophy pet" dex _MarowakDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "While weak when" - next "it's young, it" - next "becomes violent" + text "Although it's" + next "weak when young," + next "it develops a" - page "when it learns" - next "to use" - next "BONEMERANG" + page "violent nature" + next "when it learns" + next "to use BONEMERANG" dex _HaunterDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "It's said that if" - next "you feel like" - next "you're being" + text "If you get the" + next "feeling of being" + next "watched in the" - page "watched while" + page "darkness while" next "alone, HAUNTER" - next "is lurking" + next "may be lurking" dex _AbraDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -1222,18 +1222,18 @@ _AlakazamDexEntry:: ; new entry _PidgeottoDexEntry:: ; new entry text "Dives from heights" - next "of 800 meters to" - next "catch prey." + next "of 900 yards to" + next "catch prey. Its" - page "Their developed" - next "talons let them" + page "developed talons" + next "let it easily" next "carry EXEGGCUTE" dex _PidgeotDexEntry:: ; new entry text "Flies at speeds of" - next "up to Mach-2." - next "They spread their" + next "up to Mach-2. It" + next "spreads its broad," page "gorgeous wings" next "widely for" @@ -1255,9 +1255,9 @@ _BulbasaurDexEntry:: ; new entry next "argued for 6 years" next "about whether" - page "BULBASAUR is a" - next "type of plant" - next "or a mammal" + page "BULBASAUR should" + next "be classed as a" + next "plant or animal" dex _VenusaurDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -1301,33 +1301,33 @@ _SeakingDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _PonytaDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "It grazes in" - next "grasslands." - next "With strong legs," + text "With its light" + next "body and powerful" + next "legs, PONYTA can" - page "it can clear" - next "SILPH CO. in a" - next "single jump" + page "clear the SILPH" + next "CO. building in" + next "a single leap" dex _RapidashDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "RAPIDASH obey" - next "their TRAINERs" - next "dutifully." + text "It dutifully obeys" + next "a trainer it has" + next "bonded with. At" - page "They can keep" - next "pace with a" + page "top speed, it can" + next "keep pace with a" next "bullet train" dex _RattataDexEntry:: ; new entry text "They gnaw on hard" next "material to keep" - next "their fangs" + next "their fangs short." - page "short. They like" - next "acorns and" - next "walnuts" + page "They feast on" + next "nuts like walnuts" + next "and acorns" dex _RaticateDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -1341,23 +1341,23 @@ _RaticateDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _NidorinoDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Its horn can" - next "pierce diamonds." - next "Unlike NIDORINA," + text "Easily angered." + next "By wildly swinging" + next "its horn around," - page "it does not lose" - next "the ability to" - next "breed" + page "NIDORINO can even" + next "pierce through" + next "diamond" dex _NidorinaDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "They are placid," - next "but use ultrasonic" - next "cries to allure" + text "Emits ultrasonic" + next "cries that can" + next "allure foes. It" - page "foes. Despite" - next "being evolved, it" - next "doesn't lay eggs" + page "lost the ability" + next "to lay eggs" + next "upon evolving" dex _GeodudeDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -1371,21 +1371,21 @@ _GeodudeDexEntry:: ; new entry dex _PorygonDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "It was created" - next "in 1995 by SILPH" - next "CO. Criminal" + text "Created in 1995" + next "by SILPH CO." + next "Cases of illegal" - page "investigations" - next "on prize PORYGON" - next "are ongoing" + page "prize PORYGON are" + next "currently under" + next "investigation" dex _AerodactylDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "The progenitor" - next "of birds. It" - next "flew with its" + text "The progenitor of" + next "birds. It flew" + next "on broad wings," - page "broad wings while" + page "communicating by" next "emitting high-" next "pitched cries" dex @@ -1405,9 +1405,9 @@ _CharmanderDexEntry:: ; new entry next "flame on its tail," next "which it needs to" - page "survive. Smokers" - next "keep them instead" - next "of lighters" + page "survive. Sometimes" + next "kept by smokers to" + next "use as a lighter" dex _SquirtleDexEntry:: ; new entry @@ -1422,21 +1422,21 @@ _SquirtleDexEntry:: ; new entry _CharmeleonDexEntry:: ; new entry text "Its tail can lift" - next "5 adults. They" - next "flail it to knock" + next "up to 660 lbs. It" + next "flails it to knock" - page "#MON down to" - next "rend them with" - next "its claws" + page "foes down, then" + next "rends them with" + next "its sharp claws" dex _WartortleDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Their fur-covered" + text "Its fur-covered" next "tail is a symbol" next "of longevity." - page "They are popular" - next "as pets for their" + page "Highly popular as" + next "a pet for its" next "cute profile" dex @@ -1453,26 +1453,26 @@ _CharizardDexEntry:: ; new entry _OddishDexEntry:: ; new entry text "It is also known" next "as Walkimendes." - next "At night, they" + next "Said to walk up" - page "walk up to 300" - next "meters on their" - next "two roots" + page "to 1,000 feet on" + next "its two roots" + next "at night" dex _GloomDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "GLOOM's pistil" - next "emits a foul" - next "stench that makes" + text "Its pistil emits" + next "an incredibly foul" + next "odor. The stench" - page "foes faint more" - next "than a mile" - next "away" + page "alone can cause" + next "fainting from over" + next "a mile away" dex _VileplumeDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "They have the" - next "largest petals in" + text "VILEPLUME's petals" + next "are the largest in" next "the world. Its" page "pollen can cause" @@ -1482,30 +1482,30 @@ _VileplumeDexEntry:: ; new entry _BellsproutDexEntry:: ; new entry text "Because its bud" - next "looks like a" - next "human face," + next "slightly resembles" + next "a human face, it" - page "It is said to be" - next "a legendary" + page "is said to be a" + next "type of legendary" next "mandrake root" dex _WeepinbellDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "Its leaves are" - next "cutters for" - next "shredding foes." + text "It shreds foes," + next "using its leaves" + next "like cutters." - page "Their feeding is" - next "a bizarre" + page "Watching one feed" + next "is a very bizarre" next "spectacle" dex _VictreebelDexEntry:: ; new entry - text "It draws in prey" - next "with a honey-" - next "like aroma." + text "Lures prey with a" + next "honeylike aroma." + next "Omnivorous, it" - page "It will eat" - next "anything it can" - next "fit in its mouth" + page "will eat anything" + next "that can fit" + next "inside its mouth" dex diff --git a/data/pokemon/new_dex_text.asm b/data/pokemon/new_dex_text.asm index 93d6d527..e2b71c24 100644 --- a/data/pokemon/new_dex_text.asm +++ b/data/pokemon/new_dex_text.asm @@ -1,14 +1,14 @@ -_GyaoonDexEntry:: +_GyaoonDexEntry:: ; Changed to past tense to be more consistent with other fossil entries text "Very dangerous" next "and frequently" - next "rampages wildly." + next "rampaged wildly." - page "It can crush" - next "anything within" - next "its huge jaws" + page "Its jaws could" + next "even demolish" + next "huge boulders" dex -_GuardiaDexEntry:: +_GuardiaDexEntry:: ; Cubone gets a happy ending! text "A caring #MON" next "that adopts" next "orphaned CUBONE" @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ _DeerDexEntry:: next "prized by hunters" dex -_MadaamuDexEntry:: +_MadaamuDexEntry:: ; Official entry from GS beta, reworded text "A species that is" next "rarely seen. It" next "always holds a" @@ -38,24 +38,24 @@ _MadaamuDexEntry:: next "to studies" dex -_DecillaDexEntry:: - text "A timid #MON," - next "DECILLA loudly" - next "cries out for" +_DecillaDexEntry:: ; Changed to past tense to be more consistent with other fossil entries + text "Its DNA was found" + next "preserved within" + next "amber. It was a" - page "its parents" - next "if it ever feels" - next "threatened" + page "cowardly #MON," + next "often crying for" + next "its parents" dex -_BlottleDexEntry:: +_BlottleDexEntry:: ; Omanyte's entry mentions being related to mollusks, so it being a distant descendant makes sense. text "A descendant of" next "the ancient" - next "OMANYTE. It" + next "OMANYTE. BLOTTLE" - page "secretes ink" - next "from the tips of" - next "its tentacles" + page "shells are often" + next "collected and sold" + next "as souvenirs" dex _KotoraDexEntry:: @@ -79,16 +79,16 @@ _JaggDexEntry:: dex _JabettaDexEntry:: - text "An ill-tempered" - next "#MON, they" - next "frequently pick" + text "Ill-tempered and" + next "feisty, it often" + next "picks fights with" - page "fights with" - next "each other to" - next "claim territory" + page "other JABETTA to" + next "compete for food" + next "and territory" dex -_GaotoraDexEntry:: +_GaotoraDexEntry:: ; references real tiger hunting text "An endangered" next "species, due to" next "hunters targeting" @@ -113,19 +113,19 @@ _KonyaDexEntry:: next "still developing," next "so it cannot see" - page "very well. KONYA" - next "are drawn to very" - next "shiny objects" + page "very well. Likes" + next "to collect and" + next "hoard small coins" dex -_BittybatDexEntry:: - text "Due to their tiny" - next "size, several of" - next "these #MON may" +_BittybatDexEntry:: + text "Flits about in" + next "dark caves. A" + next "swarm of BITTYBAT" - page "swarm a victim" - next "at once to prey" - next "on it" + page "can overwhelm even" + next "significantly" + next "larger #MON" dex _RibbitoDexEntry:: @@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ _CryithanDexEntry:: page "enemy. It strikes" next "once the foe lets" - next "their guard down" + next "its guard down" dex _BlastykeDexEntry:: @@ -188,17 +188,17 @@ _BawliguaDexEntry:: next "cool itself down" dex -_PuchikoonDexEntry:: - text "At this stage, it" - next "struggles to" - next "keep up with" +_PuchikoonDexEntry:: ; referenced from various Ponyta entries. Funny how both Vulpix and Ponyta do this... + text "A weak runner that" + next "gradually becomes" + next "faster by chasing" - page "its parent. Its" - next "flame-covered mane" - next "is very hot" + page "after its parent." + next "Its fiery mane is" + next "hot to touch" dex -_GyopinDexEntry:: ; reworked, thank you Ness :3 ~M +_GyopinDexEntry:: ; reworked, thank you Ness :3 ~M text "Its tiny fins make" next "it an unskilled" next "swimmer. It fends" @@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ _GyopinDexEntry:: ; reworked, thank you Ness :3 ~M _GorochuDexEntry:: text "Energizes itself" next "by drawing in" - next "electricity. It" + next "lightning. It" page "boasts incredible" next "electrical and" @@ -239,13 +239,13 @@ _CheepDexEntry:: dex _TotartleDexEntry:: - text "A #MON capable" - next "of living for" - next "10,000 years." + text "A #MON capable of" + next "living for 10,000" + next "years. Its shell" - page "The shells of old" - next "TOTARTLE are fully" + page "becomes slowly" next "covered in algae" + next "as it ages" dex _WeirduckDexEntry:: @@ -279,16 +279,16 @@ _GorotoraDexEntry:: dex _OmegaDexEntry:: - text "A mechanical" - next "#MON, it was" - next "created during" + text "A recent creation" + next "by SILPH CO." + next "Modeled after the" - page "SILPH CO.'s first" - next "efforts to revive" - next "a GYAOON" + page "extinct GYAOON," + next "it's said to pack" + next "devastating power" dex -_PurakkusuDexEntry:: +_PurakkusuDexEntry:: ; Official entry from GS beta, reworded text "Withstands foes'" next "attacks with its" next "sturdy body, then" @@ -319,33 +319,33 @@ _CrockyDexEntry:: dex _PendrakenDexEntry:: - text "Often clashes" + text "It often clashes" next "with TENTACRUEL." - next "Though it lacks" + next "Sprays ink into" - page "poison, it can" - next "blind foes using" - next "its ink" + page "its foe's eyes," + next "disorienting it" + next "before attacking" dex _MagnetiteDexEntry:: - text "Its magnetic" - next "field attracts" - next "lots of metal," + text "Occasionally, it" + next "attracts so much" + next "metal to itself" - page "but this can" - next "cause it to be" - next "unable to float" + page "that it loses its" + next "ability to stay" + next "levitating" dex _NidoreignDexEntry:: - text "Born from a" - next "MOON STONE, it" - next "has the combined" + text "Exposure to a" + next "MOON STONE caused" + next "its evolution. It" - page "traits of both" - next "NIDORINA and" - next "NIDORINO" + page "combines traits" + next "of both NIDORINA" + next "and NIDORINO" dex _BarundaDexEntry:: @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ _BarundaDexEntry:: next "shrill screech" dex -_TsubomittoDexEntry:: +_TsubomittoDexEntry:: ; references Sprout Tower in Johto text "A plant #MON" next "that's revered in" next "another region." @@ -429,23 +429,23 @@ _CarapthorDexEntry:: dex _ScizorDexEntry:: - text "It swings its eye-" - next "patterned pincers" - next "up to scare its" + text "Its metal pincers" + next "can crush heavy" + next "objects with ease." - page "foes. This makes" - next "it look like it" - next "has three heads" + page "Battles between it" + next "and PURAKKUSU are" + next "a sight to behold" dex _BellossomDexEntry:: - text "BELLOSSOM gather" - next "at times and" - next "appear to dance." + text "The flowers that" + next "bloom on its head" + next "are said to be" - page "They say that the" - next "dance is a ritual" - next "to summon the sun" + page "more beautiful if" + next "it evolved from a" + next "more smelly GLOOM" dex _RhyperiorDexEntry:: @@ -459,13 +459,13 @@ _RhyperiorDexEntry:: dex _EspeonDexEntry:: - text "It uses the fine" - next "hair that covers" - next "its body to sense" + text "Its sensitive fur" + next "allows it to sense" + next "air currents. The" - page "air currents and" - next "predict its" - next "enemy's actions" + page "red orb on its" + next "forehead glows if" + next "it uses PSI" dex _UmbreonDexEntry:: ; Entry alludes to its scrapped Poison type, and I thought it was a neat touch. ~M @@ -479,23 +479,23 @@ _UmbreonDexEntry:: ; Entry alludes to its scrapped Poison type, and I thought it dex _LeafeonDexEntry:: - text "Just like a plant," - next "it can use" - next "photosynthesis." + text "It has a distinct" + next "aroma that changes" + next "with age. A" - page "As a result, it is" - next "always enveloped" - next "in clear air" + page "younger LEAFEON" + next "typically smells" + next "like fresh grass" dex _GlaceonDexEntry:: - text "By controlling its" - next "body heat, it can" - next "freeze the air" + text "It can freeze the" + next "moisture in the" + next "air around it," - page "around it to make" - next "a flurry of" - next "diamond-dust" + page "leaving a trail" + next "of powdery snow" + next "as it walks" dex _SylveonDexEntry:: @@ -509,63 +509,63 @@ _SylveonDexEntry:: dex _CrobatDexEntry:: - text "It flies silently" - next "through the dark" - next "on its four wings." + text "Although it can" + next "fly silently and" + next "swiftly using its" - page "It is often not" - next "noticed even" - next "when nearby" + page "four wings, it" + next "cannot move well" + next "on the ground" dex _PolitoedDexEntry:: - text "Whenever three or" - next "more of these get" - next "together, they" + text "It's respected and" + next "treated like a" + next "leader by POLIWAG" - page "sing in a loud" - next "voice that sounds" - next "like bellowing" + page "and POLIWHIRL, who" + next "gather around upon" + next "hearing its cry" dex _SlowkingDexEntry:: - text "Every time it" - next "yawns, TAABAN" - next "injects more" + text "TAABAN's poison" + next "stimulated its" + next "brain, making it" - page "poison into it," - next "which makes it" - next "more intelligent" + page "incredibly smart." + next "It still remains" + next "forgetful, though" dex _SteelixDexEntry:: - text "The iron that it" - next "ingested with the" - next "soil it swallowed" + text "Its hard, metallic" + next "body cannot be" + next "scratched. Using" - page "transformed its" - next "body, making it" - next "incredibly tough" + page "its sturdy jaws," + next "it can easily" + next "crush boulders" dex _HitmontopDexEntry:: - text "It fights while" - next "spinning around" - next "at high speed." + text "While balancing" + next "on its head, it" + next "spins around at" - page "If it spins too" - next "fast, it may bore" - next "into the ground" + page "high speed, all" + next "while launching" + next "powerful kicks" dex _BlisseyDexEntry:: - text "Biting into one" - next "of the eggs that" - next "it lays will make" + text "The eggs that it" + next "regularly lays are" + next "so delicious that" - page "anyone happy. It" - next "can sense sadness" - next "with its fur" + page "eating one is said" + next "to bring happiness" + next "and good fortune" dex _Porygon2DexEntry:: @@ -589,23 +589,23 @@ _KingdraDexEntry:: dex _LickilickyDexEntry:: - text "It uses its long" - next "tongue to wrap" - next "up an enemy," + text "It wraps its long" + next "tongue around its" + next "prey, leaving it" - page "leaving it soaked" - next "in a saliva that" + page "covered with a" + next "saliva that" next "causes numbness" dex _MagnezoneDexEntry:: - text "It evolved from" - next "exposure to a" - next "special magnetic" - - page "field. Its three" - next "units generate" + text "Constantly emits" next "strong magnetism" + next "from its three" + + page "units. Its antenna" + next "receives strange" + next "radio waves" dex _TangrowthDexEntry:: @@ -619,12 +619,12 @@ _TangrowthDexEntry:: dex _ElectivireDexEntry:: - text "It pushes the" - next "tips of its tails" - next "against a foe," + text "When it's excited," + next "it beats its chest" + next "repeatedly. With" - page "before unleashing" - next "over 20,000 volts" + page "every thud, it" + next "discharges sparks" next "of electricity" dex @@ -679,13 +679,13 @@ _WiglettDexEntry:: dex _WugtrioDexEntry:: - text "A trio of fish" - next "#MON that live" - next "inside a rock." - - page "They work together" - next "to trap and carry" - next "off helpless prey" + text "A trio of vicious" + next "fish #MON. It" + next "uses its long," + + page "slender bodies to" + next "trap its prey and" + next "carry it off" dex _ToedscoolDexEntry:: @@ -699,13 +699,13 @@ _ToedscoolDexEntry:: dex _ToedscruelDexEntry:: - text "They form colonies" + text "Found in colonies" next "in dark forests," - next "coiling their many" + next "coiling its many" page "tentacles around" next "prey and draining" - next "their nutrients" + next "its nutrients" dex _ScreamTailDexEntry:: @@ -730,12 +730,12 @@ _SandyShocksDexEntry:: _MeltanDexEntry:: text "Typically living" - next "in groups, these" - next "#MON eat iron" + next "in a group, this" + next "#MON eats iron" page "particles that" - next "they find in" - next "the subsoil" + next "it finds in the" + next "subsoil" dex _MelmetalDexEntry:: @@ -749,9 +749,9 @@ _MelmetalDexEntry:: dex _SirfetchdDexEntry:: - text "FARFETCH'D that" - next "wield huge leeks" - next "evolve into this" + text "A FARFETCH'D that" + next "wields a huge leek" + next "evolves into this" page "form. It guards" next "attacks using" @@ -813,9 +813,9 @@ _ArcanineHDexEntry:: next "rock-like feel." next "It dances around" - page "its foes before" - next "biting them in" - next "a vicious rage" ; reference to Raging Fury, its signature move. + page "its foe before" + next "biting it in a" + next "vicious rage" ; reference to Raging Fury, its signature move. dex _ElectrodeHDexEntry:: @@ -829,11 +829,11 @@ _ElectrodeHDexEntry:: dex _RaticateADexEntry:: ; this entry hypercompresses most Gen 7 entries - text "It commands nests" - next "of RATTATA. It" - next "will greedily" + text "Commands nests of" + next "RATTATA. It will" + next "greedily order" - page "command them to" + page "its subjects to" next "gather large" next "amounts of food" dex @@ -973,9 +973,9 @@ _TaurosPDexEntry:: next "Combat Breed," next "this TAUROS uses" - page "its thick muscles" - next "to overwhelm its" - next "opponents" + page "its short horns to" + next "target its foe's" + next "weak points" dex _TaurosPBDexEntry::