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Big Pokedex entry reworks

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After going through the 1996 Pokedex again, as well as FireRed's dex entries, I've updated the majority of dex entries to add more information, be more consistent, or just slightly reword them to make them sound better. Some could still probably be reworked, but I'm mostly satisfied with these now.
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Martha Schilling 2023-06-04 00:17:05 +01:00
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_GyaoonDexEntry:: _GyaoonDexEntry:: ; Changed to past tense to be more consistent with other fossil entries
text "Very dangerous" text "Very dangerous"
next "and frequently" next "and frequently"
next "rampages wildly." next "rampaged wildly."
page "It can crush" page "Its jaws could"
next "anything within" next "even demolish"
next "its huge jaws" next "huge boulders"
dex dex
_GuardiaDexEntry:: _GuardiaDexEntry:: ; Cubone gets a happy ending!
text "A caring #MON" text "A caring #MON"
next "that adopts" next "that adopts"
next "orphaned CUBONE" next "orphaned CUBONE"
@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ _DeerDexEntry::
next "prized by hunters" next "prized by hunters"
dex dex
_MadaamuDexEntry:: _MadaamuDexEntry:: ; Official entry from GS beta, reworded
text "A species that is" text "A species that is"
next "rarely seen. It" next "rarely seen. It"
next "always holds a" next "always holds a"
@ -38,24 +38,24 @@ _MadaamuDexEntry::
next "to studies" next "to studies"
dex dex
_DecillaDexEntry:: _DecillaDexEntry:: ; Changed to past tense to be more consistent with other fossil entries
text "A timid #MON," text "Its DNA was found"
next "DECILLA loudly" next "preserved within"
next "cries out for" next "amber. It was a"
page "its parents" page "cowardly #MON,"
next "if it ever feels" next "often crying for"
next "threatened" next "its parents"
dex dex
_BlottleDexEntry:: _BlottleDexEntry:: ; Omanyte's entry mentions being related to mollusks, so it being a distant descendant makes sense.
text "A descendant of" text "A descendant of"
next "the ancient" next "the ancient"
next "OMANYTE. It" next "OMANYTE. BLOTTLE"
page "secretes ink" page "shells are often"
next "from the tips of" next "collected and sold"
next "its tentacles" next "as souvenirs"
dex dex
_KotoraDexEntry:: _KotoraDexEntry::
@ -79,16 +79,16 @@ _JaggDexEntry::
dex dex
_JabettaDexEntry:: _JabettaDexEntry::
text "An ill-tempered" text "Ill-tempered and"
next "#MON, they" next "feisty, it often"
next "frequently pick" next "picks fights with"
page "fights with" page "other JABETTA to"
next "each other to" next "compete for food"
next "claim territory" next "and territory"
dex dex
_GaotoraDexEntry:: _GaotoraDexEntry:: ; references real tiger hunting
text "An endangered" text "An endangered"
next "species, due to" next "species, due to"
next "hunters targeting" next "hunters targeting"
@ -113,19 +113,19 @@ _KonyaDexEntry::
next "still developing," next "still developing,"
next "so it cannot see" next "so it cannot see"
page "very well. KONYA" page "very well. Likes"
next "are drawn to very" next "to collect and"
next "shiny objects" next "hoard small coins"
dex dex
_BittybatDexEntry:: _BittybatDexEntry::
text "Due to their tiny" text "Flits about in"
next "size, several of" next "dark caves. A"
next "these #MON may" next "swarm of BITTYBAT"
page "swarm a victim" page "can overwhelm even"
next "at once to prey" next "significantly"
next "on it" next "larger #MON"
dex dex
_RibbitoDexEntry:: _RibbitoDexEntry::
@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ _CryithanDexEntry::
page "enemy. It strikes" page "enemy. It strikes"
next "once the foe lets" next "once the foe lets"
next "their guard down" next "its guard down"
dex dex
_BlastykeDexEntry:: _BlastykeDexEntry::
@ -188,17 +188,17 @@ _BawliguaDexEntry::
next "cool itself down" next "cool itself down"
dex dex
_PuchikoonDexEntry:: _PuchikoonDexEntry:: ; referenced from various Ponyta entries. Funny how both Vulpix and Ponyta do this...
text "At this stage, it" text "A weak runner that"
next "struggles to" next "gradually becomes"
next "keep up with" next "faster by chasing"
page "its parent. Its" page "after its parent."
next "flame-covered mane" next "Its fiery mane is"
next "is very hot" next "hot to touch"
dex dex
_GyopinDexEntry:: ; reworked, thank you Ness :3 ~M _GyopinDexEntry:: ; reworked, thank you Ness :3 ~M
text "Its tiny fins make" text "Its tiny fins make"
next "it an unskilled" next "it an unskilled"
next "swimmer. It fends" next "swimmer. It fends"
@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ _GyopinDexEntry:: ; reworked, thank you Ness :3 ~M
_GorochuDexEntry:: _GorochuDexEntry::
text "Energizes itself" text "Energizes itself"
next "by drawing in" next "by drawing in"
next "electricity. It" next "lightning. It"
page "boasts incredible" page "boasts incredible"
next "electrical and" next "electrical and"
@ -239,13 +239,13 @@ _CheepDexEntry::
dex dex
_TotartleDexEntry:: _TotartleDexEntry::
text "A #MON capable" text "A #MON capable of"
next "of living for" next "living for 10,000"
next "10,000 years." next "years. Its shell"
page "The shells of old" page "becomes slowly"
next "TOTARTLE are fully"
next "covered in algae" next "covered in algae"
next "as it ages"
dex dex
_WeirduckDexEntry:: _WeirduckDexEntry::
@ -279,16 +279,16 @@ _GorotoraDexEntry::
dex dex
_OmegaDexEntry:: _OmegaDexEntry::
text "A mechanical" text "A recent creation"
next "#MON, it was" next "by SILPH CO."
next "created during" next "Modeled after the"
page "SILPH CO.'s first" page "extinct GYAOON,"
next "efforts to revive" next "it's said to pack"
next "a GYAOON" next "devastating power"
dex dex
_PurakkusuDexEntry:: _PurakkusuDexEntry:: ; Official entry from GS beta, reworded
text "Withstands foes'" text "Withstands foes'"
next "attacks with its" next "attacks with its"
next "sturdy body, then" next "sturdy body, then"
@ -319,33 +319,33 @@ _CrockyDexEntry::
dex dex
_PendrakenDexEntry:: _PendrakenDexEntry::
text "Often clashes" text "It often clashes"
next "with TENTACRUEL." next "with TENTACRUEL."
next "Though it lacks" next "Sprays ink into"
page "poison, it can" page "its foe's eyes,"
next "blind foes using" next "disorienting it"
next "its ink" next "before attacking"
dex dex
_MagnetiteDexEntry:: _MagnetiteDexEntry::
text "Its magnetic" text "Occasionally, it"
next "field attracts" next "attracts so much"
next "lots of metal," next "metal to itself"
page "but this can" page "that it loses its"
next "cause it to be" next "ability to stay"
next "unable to float" next "levitating"
dex dex
_NidoreignDexEntry:: _NidoreignDexEntry::
text "Born from a" text "Exposure to a"
next "MOON STONE, it" next "MOON STONE caused"
next "has the combined" next "its evolution. It"
page "traits of both" page "combines traits"
next "NIDORINA and" next "of both NIDORINA"
next "NIDORINO" next "and NIDORINO"
dex dex
_BarundaDexEntry:: _BarundaDexEntry::
@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ _BarundaDexEntry::
next "shrill screech" next "shrill screech"
dex dex
_TsubomittoDexEntry:: _TsubomittoDexEntry:: ; references Sprout Tower in Johto
text "A plant #MON" text "A plant #MON"
next "that's revered in" next "that's revered in"
next "another region." next "another region."
@ -429,23 +429,23 @@ _CarapthorDexEntry::
dex dex
_ScizorDexEntry:: _ScizorDexEntry::
text "It swings its eye-" text "Its metal pincers"
next "patterned pincers" next "can crush heavy"
next "up to scare its" next "objects with ease."
page "foes. This makes" page "Battles between it"
next "it look like it" next "and PURAKKUSU are"
next "has three heads" next "a sight to behold"
dex dex
_BellossomDexEntry:: _BellossomDexEntry::
text "BELLOSSOM gather" text "The flowers that"
next "at times and" next "bloom on its head"
next "appear to dance." next "are said to be"
page "They say that the" page "more beautiful if"
next "dance is a ritual" next "it evolved from a"
next "to summon the sun" next "more smelly GLOOM"
dex dex
_RhyperiorDexEntry:: _RhyperiorDexEntry::
@ -459,13 +459,13 @@ _RhyperiorDexEntry::
dex dex
_EspeonDexEntry:: _EspeonDexEntry::
text "It uses the fine" text "Its sensitive fur"
next "hair that covers" next "allows it to sense"
next "its body to sense" next "air currents. The"
page "air currents and" page "red orb on its"
next "predict its" next "forehead glows if"
next "enemy's actions" next "it uses PSI"
dex dex
_UmbreonDexEntry:: ; Entry alludes to its scrapped Poison type, and I thought it was a neat touch. ~M _UmbreonDexEntry:: ; Entry alludes to its scrapped Poison type, and I thought it was a neat touch. ~M
@ -479,23 +479,23 @@ _UmbreonDexEntry:: ; Entry alludes to its scrapped Poison type, and I thought it
dex dex
_LeafeonDexEntry:: _LeafeonDexEntry::
text "Just like a plant," text "It has a distinct"
next "it can use" next "aroma that changes"
next "photosynthesis." next "with age. A"
page "As a result, it is" page "younger LEAFEON"
next "always enveloped" next "typically smells"
next "in clear air" next "like fresh grass"
dex dex
_GlaceonDexEntry:: _GlaceonDexEntry::
text "By controlling its" text "It can freeze the"
next "body heat, it can" next "moisture in the"
next "freeze the air" next "air around it,"
page "around it to make" page "leaving a trail"
next "a flurry of" next "of powdery snow"
next "diamond-dust" next "as it walks"
dex dex
_SylveonDexEntry:: _SylveonDexEntry::
@ -509,63 +509,63 @@ _SylveonDexEntry::
dex dex
_CrobatDexEntry:: _CrobatDexEntry::
text "It flies silently" text "Although it can"
next "through the dark" next "fly silently and"
next "on its four wings." next "swiftly using its"
page "It is often not" page "four wings, it"
next "noticed even" next "cannot move well"
next "when nearby" next "on the ground"
dex dex
_PolitoedDexEntry:: _PolitoedDexEntry::
text "Whenever three or" text "It's respected and"
next "more of these get" next "treated like a"
next "together, they" next "leader by POLIWAG"
page "sing in a loud" page "and POLIWHIRL, who"
next "voice that sounds" next "gather around upon"
next "like bellowing" next "hearing its cry"
dex dex
_SlowkingDexEntry:: _SlowkingDexEntry::
text "Every time it" text "TAABAN's poison"
next "yawns, TAABAN" next "stimulated its"
next "injects more" next "brain, making it"
page "poison into it," page "incredibly smart."
next "which makes it" next "It still remains"
next "more intelligent" next "forgetful, though"
dex dex
_SteelixDexEntry:: _SteelixDexEntry::
text "The iron that it" text "Its hard, metallic"
next "ingested with the" next "body cannot be"
next "soil it swallowed" next "scratched. Using"
page "transformed its" page "its sturdy jaws,"
next "body, making it" next "it can easily"
next "incredibly tough" next "crush boulders"
dex dex
_HitmontopDexEntry:: _HitmontopDexEntry::
text "It fights while" text "While balancing"
next "spinning around" next "on its head, it"
next "at high speed." next "spins around at"
page "If it spins too" page "high speed, all"
next "fast, it may bore" next "while launching"
next "into the ground" next "powerful kicks"
dex dex
_BlisseyDexEntry:: _BlisseyDexEntry::
text "Biting into one" text "The eggs that it"
next "of the eggs that" next "regularly lays are"
next "it lays will make" next "so delicious that"
page "anyone happy. It" page "eating one is said"
next "can sense sadness" next "to bring happiness"
next "with its fur" next "and good fortune"
dex dex
_Porygon2DexEntry:: _Porygon2DexEntry::
@ -589,23 +589,23 @@ _KingdraDexEntry::
dex dex
_LickilickyDexEntry:: _LickilickyDexEntry::
text "It uses its long" text "It wraps its long"
next "tongue to wrap" next "tongue around its"
next "up an enemy," next "prey, leaving it"
page "leaving it soaked" page "covered with a"
next "in a saliva that" next "saliva that"
next "causes numbness" next "causes numbness"
dex dex
_MagnezoneDexEntry:: _MagnezoneDexEntry::
text "It evolved from" text "Constantly emits"
next "exposure to a"
next "special magnetic"
page "field. Its three"
next "units generate"
next "strong magnetism" next "strong magnetism"
next "from its three"
page "units. Its antenna"
next "receives strange"
next "radio waves"
dex dex
_TangrowthDexEntry:: _TangrowthDexEntry::
@ -619,12 +619,12 @@ _TangrowthDexEntry::
dex dex
_ElectivireDexEntry:: _ElectivireDexEntry::
text "It pushes the" text "When it's excited,"
next "tips of its tails" next "it beats its chest"
next "against a foe," next "repeatedly. With"
page "before unleashing" page "every thud, it"
next "over 20,000 volts" next "discharges sparks"
next "of electricity" next "of electricity"
dex dex
@ -679,13 +679,13 @@ _WiglettDexEntry::
dex dex
_WugtrioDexEntry:: _WugtrioDexEntry::
text "A trio of fish" text "A trio of vicious"
next "#MON that live" next "fish #MON. It"
next "inside a rock." next "uses its long,"
page "They work together" page "slender bodies to"
next "to trap and carry" next "trap its prey and"
next "off helpless prey" next "carry it off"
dex dex
_ToedscoolDexEntry:: _ToedscoolDexEntry::
@ -699,13 +699,13 @@ _ToedscoolDexEntry::
dex dex
_ToedscruelDexEntry:: _ToedscruelDexEntry::
text "They form colonies" text "Found in colonies"
next "in dark forests," next "in dark forests,"
next "coiling their many" next "coiling its many"
page "tentacles around" page "tentacles around"
next "prey and draining" next "prey and draining"
next "their nutrients" next "its nutrients"
dex dex
_ScreamTailDexEntry:: _ScreamTailDexEntry::
@ -730,12 +730,12 @@ _SandyShocksDexEntry::
_MeltanDexEntry:: _MeltanDexEntry::
text "Typically living" text "Typically living"
next "in groups, these" next "in a group, this"
next "#MON eat iron" next "#MON eats iron"
page "particles that" page "particles that"
next "they find in" next "it finds in the"
next "the subsoil" next "subsoil"
dex dex
_MelmetalDexEntry:: _MelmetalDexEntry::
@ -749,9 +749,9 @@ _MelmetalDexEntry::
dex dex
_SirfetchdDexEntry:: _SirfetchdDexEntry::
text "FARFETCH'D that" text "A FARFETCH'D that"
next "wield huge leeks" next "wields a huge leek"
next "evolve into this" next "evolves into this"
page "form. It guards" page "form. It guards"
next "attacks using" next "attacks using"
@ -813,9 +813,9 @@ _ArcanineHDexEntry::
next "rock-like feel." next "rock-like feel."
next "It dances around" next "It dances around"
page "its foes before" page "its foe before"
next "biting them in" next "biting it in a"
next "a vicious rage" ; reference to Raging Fury, its signature move. next "vicious rage" ; reference to Raging Fury, its signature move.
dex dex
_ElectrodeHDexEntry:: _ElectrodeHDexEntry::
@ -829,11 +829,11 @@ _ElectrodeHDexEntry::
dex dex
_RaticateADexEntry:: ; this entry hypercompresses most Gen 7 entries _RaticateADexEntry:: ; this entry hypercompresses most Gen 7 entries
text "It commands nests" text "Commands nests of"
next "of RATTATA. It" next "RATTATA. It will"
next "will greedily" next "greedily order"
page "command them to" page "its subjects to"
next "gather large" next "gather large"
next "amounts of food" next "amounts of food"
dex dex
@ -973,9 +973,9 @@ _TaurosPDexEntry::
next "Combat Breed," next "Combat Breed,"
next "this TAUROS uses" next "this TAUROS uses"
page "its thick muscles" page "its short horns to"
next "to overwhelm its" next "target its foe's"
next "opponents" next "weak points"
dex dex
_TaurosPBDexEntry:: _TaurosPBDexEntry::