Big Pokedex entry reworks

After going through the 1996 Pokedex again, as well as FireRed's dex entries, I've updated the majority of dex entries to add more information, be more consistent, or just slightly reword them to make them sound better. Some could still probably be reworked, but I'm mostly satisfied with these now.
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Martha Schilling 2023-06-04 00:17:05 +01:00
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_GyaoonDexEntry::
_GyaoonDexEntry:: ; Changed to past tense to be more consistent with other fossil entries
text "Very dangerous"
next "and frequently"
next "rampages wildly."
next "rampaged wildly."
page "It can crush"
next "anything within"
next "its huge jaws"
page "Its jaws could"
next "even demolish"
next "huge boulders"
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_GuardiaDexEntry::
_GuardiaDexEntry:: ; Cubone gets a happy ending!
text "A caring #MON"
next "that adopts"
next "orphaned CUBONE"
@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ _DeerDexEntry::
next "prized by hunters"
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_MadaamuDexEntry::
_MadaamuDexEntry:: ; Official entry from GS beta, reworded
text "A species that is"
next "rarely seen. It"
next "always holds a"
@ -38,24 +38,24 @@ _MadaamuDexEntry::
next "to studies"
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_DecillaDexEntry::
text "A timid #MON,"
next "DECILLA loudly"
next "cries out for"
_DecillaDexEntry:: ; Changed to past tense to be more consistent with other fossil entries
text "Its DNA was found"
next "preserved within"
next "amber. It was a"
page "its parents"
next "if it ever feels"
next "threatened"
page "cowardly #MON,"
next "often crying for"
next "its parents"
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_BlottleDexEntry::
_BlottleDexEntry:: ; Omanyte's entry mentions being related to mollusks, so it being a distant descendant makes sense.
text "A descendant of"
next "the ancient"
next "OMANYTE. It"
next "OMANYTE. BLOTTLE"
page "secretes ink"
next "from the tips of"
next "its tentacles"
page "shells are often"
next "collected and sold"
next "as souvenirs"
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_KotoraDexEntry::
@ -79,16 +79,16 @@ _JaggDexEntry::
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_JabettaDexEntry::
text "An ill-tempered"
next "#MON, they"
next "frequently pick"
text "Ill-tempered and"
next "feisty, it often"
next "picks fights with"
page "fights with"
next "each other to"
next "claim territory"
page "other JABETTA to"
next "compete for food"
next "and territory"
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_GaotoraDexEntry::
_GaotoraDexEntry:: ; references real tiger hunting
text "An endangered"
next "species, due to"
next "hunters targeting"
@ -113,19 +113,19 @@ _KonyaDexEntry::
next "still developing,"
next "so it cannot see"
page "very well. KONYA"
next "are drawn to very"
next "shiny objects"
page "very well. Likes"
next "to collect and"
next "hoard small coins"
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_BittybatDexEntry::
text "Due to their tiny"
next "size, several of"
next "these #MON may"
text "Flits about in"
next "dark caves. A"
next "swarm of BITTYBAT"
page "swarm a victim"
next "at once to prey"
next "on it"
page "can overwhelm even"
next "significantly"
next "larger #MON"
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_RibbitoDexEntry::
@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ _CryithanDexEntry::
page "enemy. It strikes"
next "once the foe lets"
next "their guard down"
next "its guard down"
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_BlastykeDexEntry::
@ -188,14 +188,14 @@ _BawliguaDexEntry::
next "cool itself down"
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_PuchikoonDexEntry::
text "At this stage, it"
next "struggles to"
next "keep up with"
_PuchikoonDexEntry:: ; referenced from various Ponyta entries. Funny how both Vulpix and Ponyta do this...
text "A weak runner that"
next "gradually becomes"
next "faster by chasing"
page "its parent. Its"
next "flame-covered mane"
next "is very hot"
page "after its parent."
next "Its fiery mane is"
next "hot to touch"
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_GyopinDexEntry:: ; reworked, thank you Ness :3 ~M
@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ _GyopinDexEntry:: ; reworked, thank you Ness :3 ~M
_GorochuDexEntry::
text "Energizes itself"
next "by drawing in"
next "electricity. It"
next "lightning. It"
page "boasts incredible"
next "electrical and"
@ -239,13 +239,13 @@ _CheepDexEntry::
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_TotartleDexEntry::
text "A #MON capable"
next "of living for"
next "10,000 years."
text "A #MON capable of"
next "living for 10,000"
next "years. Its shell"
page "The shells of old"
next "TOTARTLE are fully"
page "becomes slowly"
next "covered in algae"
next "as it ages"
dex
_WeirduckDexEntry::
@ -279,16 +279,16 @@ _GorotoraDexEntry::
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_OmegaDexEntry::
text "A mechanical"
next "#MON, it was"
next "created during"
text "A recent creation"
next "by SILPH CO."
next "Modeled after the"
page "SILPH CO.'s first"
next "efforts to revive"
next "a GYAOON"
page "extinct GYAOON,"
next "it's said to pack"
next "devastating power"
dex
_PurakkusuDexEntry::
_PurakkusuDexEntry:: ; Official entry from GS beta, reworded
text "Withstands foes'"
next "attacks with its"
next "sturdy body, then"
@ -319,33 +319,33 @@ _CrockyDexEntry::
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_PendrakenDexEntry::
text "Often clashes"
text "It often clashes"
next "with TENTACRUEL."
next "Though it lacks"
next "Sprays ink into"
page "poison, it can"
next "blind foes using"
next "its ink"
page "its foe's eyes,"
next "disorienting it"
next "before attacking"
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_MagnetiteDexEntry::
text "Its magnetic"
next "field attracts"
next "lots of metal,"
text "Occasionally, it"
next "attracts so much"
next "metal to itself"
page "but this can"
next "cause it to be"
next "unable to float"
page "that it loses its"
next "ability to stay"
next "levitating"
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_NidoreignDexEntry::
text "Born from a"
next "MOON STONE, it"
next "has the combined"
text "Exposure to a"
next "MOON STONE caused"
next "its evolution. It"
page "traits of both"
next "NIDORINA and"
next "NIDORINO"
page "combines traits"
next "of both NIDORINA"
next "and NIDORINO"
dex
_BarundaDexEntry::
@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ _BarundaDexEntry::
next "shrill screech"
dex
_TsubomittoDexEntry::
_TsubomittoDexEntry:: ; references Sprout Tower in Johto
text "A plant #MON"
next "that's revered in"
next "another region."
@ -429,23 +429,23 @@ _CarapthorDexEntry::
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_ScizorDexEntry::
text "It swings its eye-"
next "patterned pincers"
next "up to scare its"
text "Its metal pincers"
next "can crush heavy"
next "objects with ease."
page "foes. This makes"
next "it look like it"
next "has three heads"
page "Battles between it"
next "and PURAKKUSU are"
next "a sight to behold"
dex
_BellossomDexEntry::
text "BELLOSSOM gather"
next "at times and"
next "appear to dance."
text "The flowers that"
next "bloom on its head"
next "are said to be"
page "They say that the"
next "dance is a ritual"
next "to summon the sun"
page "more beautiful if"
next "it evolved from a"
next "more smelly GLOOM"
dex
_RhyperiorDexEntry::
@ -459,13 +459,13 @@ _RhyperiorDexEntry::
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_EspeonDexEntry::
text "It uses the fine"
next "hair that covers"
next "its body to sense"
text "Its sensitive fur"
next "allows it to sense"
next "air currents. The"
page "air currents and"
next "predict its"
next "enemy's actions"
page "red orb on its"
next "forehead glows if"
next "it uses PSI"
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_UmbreonDexEntry:: ; Entry alludes to its scrapped Poison type, and I thought it was a neat touch. ~M
@ -479,23 +479,23 @@ _UmbreonDexEntry:: ; Entry alludes to its scrapped Poison type, and I thought it
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_LeafeonDexEntry::
text "Just like a plant,"
next "it can use"
next "photosynthesis."
text "It has a distinct"
next "aroma that changes"
next "with age. A"
page "As a result, it is"
next "always enveloped"
next "in clear air"
page "younger LEAFEON"
next "typically smells"
next "like fresh grass"
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_GlaceonDexEntry::
text "By controlling its"
next "body heat, it can"
next "freeze the air"
text "It can freeze the"
next "moisture in the"
next "air around it,"
page "around it to make"
next "a flurry of"
next "diamond-dust"
page "leaving a trail"
next "of powdery snow"
next "as it walks"
dex
_SylveonDexEntry::
@ -509,63 +509,63 @@ _SylveonDexEntry::
dex
_CrobatDexEntry::
text "It flies silently"
next "through the dark"
next "on its four wings."
text "Although it can"
next "fly silently and"
next "swiftly using its"
page "It is often not"
next "noticed even"
next "when nearby"
page "four wings, it"
next "cannot move well"
next "on the ground"
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_PolitoedDexEntry::
text "Whenever three or"
next "more of these get"
next "together, they"
text "It's respected and"
next "treated like a"
next "leader by POLIWAG"
page "sing in a loud"
next "voice that sounds"
next "like bellowing"
page "and POLIWHIRL, who"
next "gather around upon"
next "hearing its cry"
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_SlowkingDexEntry::
text "Every time it"
next "yawns, TAABAN"
next "injects more"
text "TAABAN's poison"
next "stimulated its"
next "brain, making it"
page "poison into it,"
next "which makes it"
next "more intelligent"
page "incredibly smart."
next "It still remains"
next "forgetful, though"
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_SteelixDexEntry::
text "The iron that it"
next "ingested with the"
next "soil it swallowed"
text "Its hard, metallic"
next "body cannot be"
next "scratched. Using"
page "transformed its"
next "body, making it"
next "incredibly tough"
page "its sturdy jaws,"
next "it can easily"
next "crush boulders"
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_HitmontopDexEntry::
text "It fights while"
next "spinning around"
next "at high speed."
text "While balancing"
next "on its head, it"
next "spins around at"
page "If it spins too"
next "fast, it may bore"
next "into the ground"
page "high speed, all"
next "while launching"
next "powerful kicks"
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_BlisseyDexEntry::
text "Biting into one"
next "of the eggs that"
next "it lays will make"
text "The eggs that it"
next "regularly lays are"
next "so delicious that"
page "anyone happy. It"
next "can sense sadness"
next "with its fur"
page "eating one is said"
next "to bring happiness"
next "and good fortune"
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_Porygon2DexEntry::
@ -589,23 +589,23 @@ _KingdraDexEntry::
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_LickilickyDexEntry::
text "It uses its long"
next "tongue to wrap"
next "up an enemy,"
text "It wraps its long"
next "tongue around its"
next "prey, leaving it"
page "leaving it soaked"
next "in a saliva that"
page "covered with a"
next "saliva that"
next "causes numbness"
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_MagnezoneDexEntry::
text "It evolved from"
next "exposure to a"
next "special magnetic"
page "field. Its three"
next "units generate"
text "Constantly emits"
next "strong magnetism"
next "from its three"
page "units. Its antenna"
next "receives strange"
next "radio waves"
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_TangrowthDexEntry::
@ -619,12 +619,12 @@ _TangrowthDexEntry::
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_ElectivireDexEntry::
text "It pushes the"
next "tips of its tails"
next "against a foe,"
text "When it's excited,"
next "it beats its chest"
next "repeatedly. With"
page "before unleashing"
next "over 20,000 volts"
page "every thud, it"
next "discharges sparks"
next "of electricity"
dex
@ -679,13 +679,13 @@ _WiglettDexEntry::
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_WugtrioDexEntry::
text "A trio of fish"
next "#MON that live"
next "inside a rock."
text "A trio of vicious"
next "fish #MON. It"
next "uses its long,"
page "They work together"
next "to trap and carry"
next "off helpless prey"
page "slender bodies to"
next "trap its prey and"
next "carry it off"
dex
_ToedscoolDexEntry::
@ -699,13 +699,13 @@ _ToedscoolDexEntry::
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_ToedscruelDexEntry::
text "They form colonies"
text "Found in colonies"
next "in dark forests,"
next "coiling their many"
next "coiling its many"
page "tentacles around"
next "prey and draining"
next "their nutrients"
next "its nutrients"
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_ScreamTailDexEntry::
@ -730,12 +730,12 @@ _SandyShocksDexEntry::
_MeltanDexEntry::
text "Typically living"
next "in groups, these"
next "#MON eat iron"
next "in a group, this"
next "#MON eats iron"
page "particles that"
next "they find in"
next "the subsoil"
next "it finds in the"
next "subsoil"
dex
_MelmetalDexEntry::
@ -749,9 +749,9 @@ _MelmetalDexEntry::
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_SirfetchdDexEntry::
text "FARFETCH'D that"
next "wield huge leeks"
next "evolve into this"
text "A FARFETCH'D that"
next "wields a huge leek"
next "evolves into this"
page "form. It guards"
next "attacks using"
@ -813,9 +813,9 @@ _ArcanineHDexEntry::
next "rock-like feel."
next "It dances around"
page "its foes before"
next "biting them in"
next "a vicious rage" ; reference to Raging Fury, its signature move.
page "its foe before"
next "biting it in a"
next "vicious rage" ; reference to Raging Fury, its signature move.
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_ElectrodeHDexEntry::
@ -829,11 +829,11 @@ _ElectrodeHDexEntry::
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_RaticateADexEntry:: ; this entry hypercompresses most Gen 7 entries
text "It commands nests"
next "of RATTATA. It"
next "will greedily"
text "Commands nests of"
next "RATTATA. It will"
next "greedily order"
page "command them to"
page "its subjects to"
next "gather large"
next "amounts of food"
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@ -973,9 +973,9 @@ _TaurosPDexEntry::
next "Combat Breed,"
next "this TAUROS uses"
page "its thick muscles"
next "to overwhelm its"
next "opponents"
page "its short horns to"
next "target its foe's"
next "weak points"
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_TaurosPBDexEntry::